Post by Valda on Feb 1, 2010 17:14:53 GMT -5
Hi Lene,
Just getting sorted in Homer B and working through /Scylla as the first model for the multiple paragraphs to a scene idea but it look from the teacher's manual that for this story the scenes are generally less than or equal to a paragraph.
which is making it hard to get the idea across? Have I gotten it wrong, or am I meant to encourage the change in her writing when er do the imitation?
Regards Valda
Just getting sorted in Homer B and working through /Scylla as the first model for the multiple paragraphs to a scene idea but it look from the teacher's manual that for this story the scenes are generally less than or equal to a paragraph.
which is making it hard to get the idea across? Have I gotten it wrong, or am I meant to encourage the change in her writing when er do the imitation?
Regards Valda
